I read this on your facebook. I agreed with the guy who said that someone loved this Renee and she fell for someone else. (Or words to that affect.) Very sad. 

@mtngirlsouth - Thank you for the rec as little as i am here this time of year I need the help

Sounds like someone loved another that maybe didn't even know it but they found a love that was not them so the love the writer had for that person can never be known because they were never told.

Not sure if thats even close,but losing a niece a couple weeks ago has caused me to think more about telling folks I love them before that time never gets to come again.

I like it,it's not easy to follow.Had to read it several times,but then I'm slow.

I don't do twitter and only have personal friends on Facebook now.Hope you and that sweet baby are doing well.

It is alwasys interesting when you post poetry or thoughts that aren't political. It is seeing another side of Paige.

I loved it...it reminded me of time that I was in that place.The crazy part is...the guy it reminded me of moved on and now has a family with a Renee. :) 

"My love, my life is never to be the same" maybe try - My love, my life is never the same to be. Could flow better … ?

I like it. it reminds me of the ending of my last relationship a bit.

@Relic47 - it does flow better thank you i would have never thought of that

@jordon@revelife - im sorry to hear that 

@trunthepaige - no its completely find now :) I don't cry that we ended. I smile because we happened at all. I've learned a lot from the ending of the relationship. It was worth it.

I like it.

though i think it would be better written as a prose, i do "feel" it.  the emotions are passed over well.

Honestly, I'm not finding a rhythm and I don't like that.

Well written =)

@VampireOfSeduction - I wish I had that in me I have tried 

@buddy71 - I tend to agree but real prose just seems to not be in me. A flow and cadence seems to be the best I can get so far

i love it. i feel his pain

@trunthepaige - as long as you get your point across, i guess it doesnt matter.  and you did get it across here. i also can see this as a short story idea.

@electrons_in_hatius_2009 -thank you

@okitapieds - that is always what I want to make someone feel. thank you

@SolidStateTheory - I like romantic Paige.

@ShimmerBodyCream - That is basically what I am, so you love me :)

so much feeling conveyed. i want more of this.

And then you realize how happy that person is, and then you know that person finds  your suffering amusing, and then you realize that your own pain is your own fault for being weak, and then you realize no matter how much time passes by, you are not strong enough to break away from the bond, for although she does not love me, I am a part of her, and although I will never see her again, my heart cries out her name, and although we never spoke, her existence is a sharp pain in my mind, and... it feels like I've been destroyed inside out, it makes no sense this impact, but then again, this pain has made me stronger, so that when I am in the heat of battle, I remember her face, and my sword becomes unbeatable.  The agony of my suffering overcomes all truths, all love and God himself.